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FOR AGES 6 - 10

Max loves puddles, but when he discovers a shimmering one at the bottom of his garden, he realises it is not ordinary. Jumping in, he falls into a magical world of floating islands, glowing rivers, and castles made of bubbles. Guided by a mysterious fluffy creature, Max explores this enchanted land, but he must find his way home before the puddle dries and the portal closes forever.

MAX AND THE MAGICAL PUDDLE

By DRAKARIS "Drake" THALION 

.MAX AND THE MAGICAL PUDDLE

Max had always loved puddles. Big ones, small ones, muddy ones, clear ones, puddles that reflected the sky like mirrors and puddles that swallowed his boots with a loud squelch. Some people saw puddles as nothing more than messy little pools of water left behind by the rain, but Max knew better. Puddles were something more.

They were possibilities.

Every time he jumped into one, he imagined where it might take him if only it were deep enough. Maybe to a world under the sea where fish talked and played games. Maybe to the top of the tallest mountain, where clouds drifted below his feet. Maybe even to another planet, where the sky was green and the ground was soft like marshmallows. Max believed puddles held secrets, and on one rainy afternoon, he was about to discover just how right he was.

The sky had been crying all morning, filling the world with raindrops that dripped from rooftops, ran down windows, and splashed onto the pavement. By the time the rain stopped, Max’s garden had transformed into a watery wonderland. Puddles were everywhere, scattered like tiny lakes across the grass. His mum’s voice called from inside the house.

"Max, make sure you wear your boots!"

Max had already pulled on his bright yellow wellies before she even spoke. He had been waiting all morning for the rain to stop so he could run outside and explore. He tugged on his raincoat, dashed into the garden, and immediately jumped into the nearest puddle. Water sprayed in all directions. Max laughed and ran to the next puddle. Then the next. He stomped, twirled, and kicked his way through the garden, watching the ripples spread like tiny waves.

Then he saw it.

At the far end of the garden, near the old oak tree, lay a puddle unlike any other. It shimmered, not just with water but with something more. Colours swirled beneath its surface—deep blues, shining golds, flickering pinks, and a strange silvery glow that seemed to pulse like a heartbeat. It was bigger than the others, stretching between the roots of the tree as if it had always been there, waiting for someone to find it.

Max frowned and took a cautious step closer. This puddle was different. It did not ripple when the wind blew. It did not reflect the sky or the tree above it. Instead, when he looked inside, he saw something impossible. A sky that was not his own. A world that should not have been there. His heart pounded.

He knelt down and reached toward the water. The moment his fingers brushed the surface, the swirling colours spun faster. The puddle began to glow. A soft humming sound filled the air, like the distant chime of bells. Max knew he should probably step back. He knew puddles were not supposed to do this. But Max was not the kind of boy who stepped back.

He took a deep breath and jumped.

The moment his boots left the ground, he felt it. The air around him shifted. Instead of a splash, instead of the cool slap of water against his legs, Max fell straight through. The world spun in a blur of colours. Wind rushed past his ears, and his stomach flipped as if he were on the highest roller coaster in existence. He tumbled through endless light, his arms flailing, his breath caught in his throat.

Then he landed. But not on grass. Not on mud. On something soft. Max sat up quickly. His heart raced as he looked around. He was not in his garden anymore. He was sitting on a cloud. A real, floating, fluffy cloud. It was cool and bouncy beneath him, stretching out in all directions like a soft white island.

Max’s eyes grew wide. The sky was not just above him. It was all around him. Golden bridges arched between floating islands, their railings shimmering like stardust. Trees with silver leaves rustled in the breeze, whispering words he could not understand. A river of sparkling jelly wobbled below, glowing softly as fish made of pure light darted in and out of its surface. In the distance, a castle made entirely of bubbles drifted in the sky, its towers shifting and changing shape as if it were alive.

Max’s mouth fell open. A small, fluffy creature hopped toward him. It had bright blue eyes and a tail that twinkled like the night sky. It looked a little like a rabbit, but its ears curled at the tips, and when it spoke, its voice sounded like the gentle chime of bells.

"Welcome, Puddle Jumper," the creature said.

Max blinked. "Puddle Jumper?"

The creature tilted its head. "You found the secret. Every puddle hides a world. But only the best splashers can find them."

Max grinned. He had always known puddles were special.

"Can I explore?" he asked.

The creature nodded. "You may go wherever you like, but remember this. When the puddles dry, the way home will close. If you do not leave before that happens, you must wait for the next rain before you can return."

Max barely heard the warning. He was too excited. He ran across the cloud and leapt onto a rainbow bridge. It bent beneath his feet like a trampoline, sending him bouncing high into the air. He landed on a floating island covered in golden trees. Their leaves rustled, whispering in a language he wished he could understand.

As he walked deeper into the strange land, he met creatures of all kinds. A family of glowing butterflies that carried messages on their wings. A talking tree that told stories of other Puddle Jumpers who had come before him. A river of liquid light where tiny silver fish swam in endless circles.

Then, he saw it.

The Bubble Castle. It floated high in the sky, shifting, changing, glowing. It looked like the kind of place where secrets lived. Max knew he had to get inside.

He ran toward a long bridge made of floating stepping stones. As he jumped from one to the next, the stones changed colour beneath his feet. Finally, he reached the castle gates. They were made of mist, swirling like smoke. As he stepped forward, they parted for him, letting him inside.

Max gasped. The castle was filled with floating bubbles. Each one held a memory. A girl riding a giant butterfly. A boy bouncing on a moon made of jelly. A group of children running through a sky full of stars. Max reached out to touch one, but before his fingers could make contact, the small fluffy creature appeared beside him again.

"It is time," it said softly. "The puddle is closing. You must return now, or you will have to wait until the next rain."

Max’s heart sank. He did not want to leave.

"Will I ever come back?" he asked.

The creature’s blue eyes twinkled. "If you find the right puddle, then yes."

Max took one last look at the castle, the glowing fish, the candyfloss islands, then stepped back onto the cloud. The moment he did, the air shifted. The world spun. He was pulled upward, faster and faster, until he splashed back into his garden.

He was back. The colours were gone. The puddle was just water again. Had it all been real?

Max reached into his pocket. He pulled out a tiny golden leaf.

Max grinned.

Not all puddles were ordinary. Some were doorways. And he would never stop searching for them.

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